First Draft Final Test EFL Writing 2 Class
Rumah Betang
Betang is a long house which is home to the indigenous Dayak (Ngaju) in Central Kalimantan, which are located in different parts of Borneo, mainly in upstream areas which used to be a residential center Dayak. Parts of buildings for residential Dayak, actually home Betang is the heart of the social fabric of life of the Dayaks. Betang culture is a reflection of the unity in the daily life of the Dayaks. Inside the house each individual life in households and communities are systematically arranged by mutual agreement as outlined in the main culture. Law that stands in his home life Betang is the value of togetherness (communalism) among the citizens who inhabit it, regardless of differences betang's. The difference that they have the characteristics, namely; stage shape, elongated. At certain Dayak tribe, long home-making should be in line with the upstream sunrise and next downstream towards sunset, as a symbol of the working-hard to survive from the sun to grow and come home in the sun extinguished. Rumah Betang is a custom home in Central Kalimantan that unique and more than one hundred people live in this home.
Indigenous : Originating or occurring naturally in a particular place native.
Upstream : Moving or situated in the opposite direction from that in which a stream or river flows nearer to the source.
Residential : Designed for people to live in.
Fabric : The basic structure of a society, culture, activity, etc.
Households : A house and its occupants regarded as a unit.
Citizens : A legally recognized subject or national of a state or commonwealth, either native or naturalized.
Regardless : Despite the prevailing circumstances.
Extinguished : Cause (a fire or light) to cease to burn or shine.
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please use idented paragraph and make a strange word . don't forget to make your own word because much meaning difficult to understand
BalasHapusfor your conclusion,,don't forget to use, for example in brief, in conclusion..all of that's good.
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BalasHapusThat was amazing information.
BalasHapusI just suggest about the topic sentence. Could you make it short and clearly, please?. It seems too difficult and too long to be an TS. Look at second sentence, "Home betang?" I am sure that you know what's the true. "Law that stands in his home life Betang is the value...", I will write "The law was standing there is the value...."
"The difference that they have the characteristics, namely; stage shape, elongated" to be "The differences of them are: the characteristic, name, ....."
The best part of this is your conclusion, it's very interesting, and powerful :) Keep Writing friend..