Definition Paragraph EFL Writing 2 Class

Step 1
* What is Coto Manggala?
* What distinguishes between Coto Manggala with the other soup?
* Why do you think Coto Manggala  so popular in Pangkalan Bun?

Step 2
Topic Sentences : Coto Manggala is a typical food from Pangkalan Bun.
Supporting Sentences :
               1. The ingredient that distinguishes between Coto Manggala with the other soup.
               2. The reason about Coto Manggala is so popular in Pangkalan Bun.
Concluding sentence : Coto Manggala is a food that typical and unique from Pangkalan Bun.

Step 3
Coto Manggala

        Coto Manggala is a typical food from Pangkalan Bun. This soup is called Coto Manggala because people in Pangkalan Bun mention cassava with manggala. This soup made of cassava or yam. How to eat this soup is different, this soup is not eaten with rice, but with cassava. And the meat used in this soup is also different, they use chicken feet. That's the distinguishes between Coto Manggala with other soup. This soup has a different taste and only on certain occasions. Because so unique, this food also had to get MURI record in 2009 of 8,000 bowls of soup manggala lined along 2 KM. It makes Coto Manggala very popular. In brief, Coto Manggala is a food that typical and unique  from Pangkalan Bun.

Typical : Having the usual qualities of the particular thing.
Yam : Large root of a tropical plant that is cooked as a vegetable.
Distinguishes : Be a characteristic that makes two things different.
Occasions : Special event or celebration.
MURI : Museum Record of Indonesia.
KM : KiloMeters.


Komentar

  1. Unknown30 Desember 2015 pukul 04.38

    That's good, but pay attention with your grammar. "This soup is called Coto Manggala..." to be "This soup was calling..." or "This soup called..." but I will choose the first option. why don't you sign the manggala for the strange word? I think it will be efficient. "this soup is not eaten with.." to be "this soup is not eating with..." or "this soup has been eaten with..." and this one "they use chicken feet" become "they used chicken's feet". But over all, I like this one :)

    BalasHapus
  2. Unknown30 Desember 2015 pukul 04.40

    Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.

    BalasHapus
  3. Unknown30 Desember 2015 pukul 06.35

    your paragraph is so good. just focus on structure in your paragraph.

    BalasHapus

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